Mindful Micropoetry, Shared in a Flowing River of Community
This is truly gorgeous--so packed with meaning it's amazing. It really is incredible how much you can put into just one line. I love the idea of the moon setting as well as the sun rising. The man tucking the darkness into his pocket while the sun's not quite ready to rise. I learned a word, too--so that's what ingenue means. Love it. :) I'm so glad, and grateful you came across to comment on my efforts or I'd never have seen this beautiful work.
I am humbled. Thank you.
Such beautiful writing. I'm so glad you found me so I can enjoy your work.xoxo