This is truly gorgeous--so packed with meaning it's amazing. It really is incredible how much you can put into just one line. I love the idea of the moon setting as well as the sun rising. The man tucking the darkness into his pocket while the sun's not quite ready to rise. I learned a word, too--so that's what ingenue means. Love it. :) I'm so glad, and grateful you came across to comment on my efforts or I'd never have seen this beautiful work.
This is truly gorgeous--so packed with meaning it's amazing. It really is incredible how much you can put into just one line. I love the idea of the moon setting as well as the sun rising. The man tucking the darkness into his pocket while the sun's not quite ready to rise. I learned a word, too--so that's what ingenue means. Love it. :) I'm so glad, and grateful you came across to comment on my efforts or I'd never have seen this beautiful work.
ReplyDeleteI am humbled. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteSuch beautiful writing. I'm so glad you found me so I can enjoy your work.
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