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Last lilting steps? OMG, sad...Someone is Special
Yes, a step as a lilting one. It was, I think, my last girlhood steps. I never knew until I wrote this haiku that on this day, 21 years ago, I took my last steps as a girl.
Oh shock! I recently became schooled in shock and I can say that you nailed it here!
I was thinking of the shock of cold water...here, in the Pac NW, the Pacific Ocean gets to be a balmy 55 degrees F or so. It is a shock. Looks so inviting.
I understand the sentiment completely. Thank you for sharing!
just read your reply to SiS and your haiku suddenly took a different meaning to me. made me reminisce and the memory made me smile... beautiful haiku!