Mindful Micropoetry, Shared in a Flowing River of Community
powerful one.well done.
Nice! I am still trying to work mine out. It may not go up for a bit.
I love the words chosen, rhythmical in a somber pattern, good job!http://lynnaima.wordpress.com
“Volcanic anger ashes,” now that is a major league grumble.
Never realized the different types of grumbles there could be! Great haiku!
just fantastic, grumbling really is a bit like rumbling of a volcano.trishahttp://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/11/grumble/
Identify the low rumblings before they turn into an eruption so large, that it becomes difficult to control!!
Its great to see such a different take on 'grumble' ..nice :)sarah
powerful words Julie.. You convey a lot in Haiku..Someone is Special