Saturday, February 12, 2011

Daily Haiku Challenge - Day 13 - Grumble

I read the prompt and heard the sounds of long ago. Thank you, SIS, for your daily Haiku Prompting. (You may write along with us, too, if you click here. Try it!)

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Low nattering threats
Volcanic anger ashes
Shouts beyond grumbles





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9 comments:

  1. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryFebruary 12, 2011 at 12:00 PM

    powerful one.
    well done.

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  2. Kristen HaskellFebruary 12, 2011 at 12:53 PM

    Nice! I am still trying to work mine out. It may not go up for a bit.

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2011 at 5:21 PM

    I love the words chosen, rhythmical in a somber pattern, good job!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com

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  4. Mike PatrickFebruary 12, 2011 at 7:23 PM

    “Volcanic anger ashes,” now that is a major league grumble.

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  5. LolamouseFebruary 12, 2011 at 8:46 PM

    Never realized the different types of grumbles there could be! Great haiku!

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  6. trishaFebruary 12, 2011 at 10:41 PM

    just fantastic, grumbling really is a bit like rumbling of a volcano.

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/11/grumble/

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  7. NankaFebruary 13, 2011 at 4:06 AM

    Identify the low rumblings before they turn into an eruption so large, that it becomes difficult to control!!

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  8. Sarah malikFebruary 13, 2011 at 6:01 AM

    Its great to see such a different take on 'grumble' ..nice :)

    sarah

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  9. Someone is SpecialFebruary 15, 2011 at 7:24 PM

    powerful words Julie.. You convey a lot in Haiku..

    Someone is Special

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