Saturday, February 12, 2011

Daily Haiku Challenge - Day 13 - Grumble

I read the prompt and heard the sounds of long ago. Thank you, SIS, for your daily Haiku Prompting. (You may write along with us, too, if you click here. Try it!)

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Low nattering threats
Volcanic anger ashes
Shouts beyond grumbles






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9 comments:

  1. Nice! I am still trying to work mine out. It may not go up for a bit.

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  2. I love the words chosen, rhythmical in a somber pattern, good job!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com

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  3. “Volcanic anger ashes,” now that is a major league grumble.

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  4. Never realized the different types of grumbles there could be! Great haiku!

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  5. just fantastic, grumbling really is a bit like rumbling of a volcano.

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/11/grumble/

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  6. Identify the low rumblings before they turn into an eruption so large, that it becomes difficult to control!!

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  7. Its great to see such a different take on 'grumble' ..nice :)

    sarah

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  8. powerful words Julie.. You convey a lot in Haiku..

    Someone is Special

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