Thursday, February 10, 2011

Daily Haiku Challenge: Day 10

Vanishing world
Empty chamber, prison-like
~ Move to the exit ~










Join the haiku writers at the Daily Haiku Challenge in February. 


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6 comments:

  1. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 10, 2011 at 8:00 AM

    profound Haiku.
    love it.

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2011 at 9:21 AM

    very poignant - thank you for sharing. becca

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  3. Mike PatrickFebruary 10, 2011 at 11:28 AM

    Why is it what we work so hard to build often turns into a prison? Nice haiku.

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  4. Sarah malikFebruary 10, 2011 at 12:11 PM

    a scary thought...but I am sure the exit leads onto a better way...wonderfully knit haiku!

    sarah

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  5. Paulog30February 11, 2011 at 9:16 PM

    Nice imagery!

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  6. Someone is SpecialFebruary 11, 2011 at 10:06 PM

    poignant Haiku Julie.. Loved your take..

    Someone is Special

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